Gene Spafford wrote:
> The word "since" means "time since" and not causality.
* Replaced the word "since" as suggested
- see aragraphs 2 and 5
* Further strengthened 2nd sentance in 2nd paragraph
- replaced "the education of ... specialists may be hindered"
with "the education of ... specialists will be hindered"
> I do not believe the letter needs to be further shortened. I think
> it is ready to go.
Dave Mann || e-mail: firstname.lastname@example.org
Senior Security Analyst || phone: 508-485-7737 x254
BindView Corporation || fax: 508-485-0737
As leading security practitioners, educators, vendors, and users of
information security, we wish to register our misgivings about the
Council of Europe draft treaty on Crime in Cyberspace.
We are concerned that portions of the proposed treaty may result in
criminalizing techniques and software commonly used to make computer
systems resistant to attack. Signatory states passing legislation to
implement the treaty may endanger the security of their computer
systems because computer users in those countries will not be able to
adequately protect their computer systems and the education of
information protection specialists will be hindered.
Critical to the protection of computer systems and infrastructure is
the ability to
* Test software for weaknesses
* Verify the presence of defects in computer systems
* Exchange vulnerability information
System administrators, researchers, consultants and companies all
routinely develop, use, and share software designed to exercise known
and suspected vulnerabilities. Academic institutions use these
tools to educate students and in research to develop improved
defenses. Our combined experience suggests that it is impossible
to reliably distinguish software used in computer crime from that
used for these legitimate purposes. In fact, they are often
Currently, article 6 of the draft treaty is vague regarding the use,
distribution, and possession of software that could be used to
violate the security of computer systems. We agree that damaging or
breaking into computer systems is wrong and we unequivocally support
laws against such inappropriate behavior. We affirm that a goal of the
treaty and resulting legislation should be to permit the development
and application of good security measures. However, legislation that
criminalizes security software development, distribution and use
is counter to that goal, as it would adversely impact security
practitioners, researchers, and educators.
Therefore, we respectfully request that the treaty drafters remove
section a.1 from article 6, and modify section b accordingly; the
articles on computer intrusion and damage (viz., articles 1-5) are
already sufficient to proscribe any improper use of security-related
software or information.
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